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Someone Said Goodbye by ~Seabirdicat:iconSeabirdicat:



I remember way back when,
we met one day and I said hi,
and we started talking before I realized
someone said goodbye.

It was like an echo,
coming to me and to you
and it seemed to come from nowhere
until it had passed through.

"What was that?" I looked about.
"I don't know." You did the same.
We shrugged and laughed together,
as if it never came.

Soon after that, we tied a knot
that would bind us together for good,
and we made a promise to stay that way
like all best friends forever should

and I never thought back until now
to the goodbyes we heard before;
I don't know who said it then
but now the word means so much more.

Cause whoever they had been
I now had you to fill the space.
without even a moment of emptiness,
Someone came and took their place.

But now someone else is calling you
and pulling loose our tie...
I remember when I said hello
Now I'm the one to say Goodbye
©2006-2009 ~Seabirdicat
:iconseabirdicat:

Author's Comments

Well I just got the new Enya CD for my mom, Amarantine (yeah yeah it's not so new anymore). And I was reading the names of the songs and there was one called someone said goodbye, and it seemed so sad. I knew I had to write a poem with that title, so I did, before I even listened to what the song was. This is what came out...I'm sure almost everyone can relate.
And this has nothin to do with you Rae XP

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:iconknottedmind:
Wow, this is really good. This is going into my favorites :-)
:iconlgthaoshi14:
"Cause whoever they had been
I now had you to fill the space."

that should read ...I know...
Other than that, this poem holds a great deal of meaning.
Nicely done =)

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:iconseabirdicat:
hmm... would it be better if it said their space?
:iconlgthaoshi14:
no, I just meant to check your spelling.

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...
:iconseabird:
oh... but "I now" is right... I dont mean "i know had you" that doesnt make sense ^w^

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:iconlgthaoshi14:
oh, I am terribly sorry. My poor judgement, I read it too fast and thought something completely diffferent then what you were saying.

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...
:iconlgthaoshi14:
oh, I am terribly sorry. My poor judgement, I read it too fast and thought something completely diffferent then what you were saying.

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...
:iconseabird:
no problem. Thanks for reading!

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